Comments on: ELVES

By: Dr. Thunda

Dr. Thunda — Thu, 21 May 2009 17:51:29 +0000

My sister and I saw an elf once in Miami, FL while waiting for a bus. It kind of phased into our vision with a bright halo and was peeing in some bushes.

By: zell

zell — Sun, 03 May 2009 05:48:43 +0000

Thats not an elf! Elves are like human in size… Maybe you’re pertaining to a gnomes! Anyway, that is a good introduction.. Oh, and please do a sketch of your elves? Just curious…

By: Nik P

Nik P — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 04:20:04 +0000

How far along with your book are you? If you ever want to get some feedback from children, I would be more than happy to read your story to my grade 5 class! This is right up their alley :0)

By: Danny

Danny — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 17:03:20 +0000

I love it!!! Can’t wait to read more. Great setup. Tom’s right, you’re gonna have to design a video game to this, but maybe wait until after the movie adaption of your book comes out that way you’ll make more money off of all the merchandising. Perhaps I’m skipping too far ahead. Really great job though!

By: Tom Terranova

Tom Terranova — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 16:56:12 +0000

ps – i love the term elfsteads you have coined and the whole idea of an overcrowded grove of little elves.

By: Tom Terranova

Tom Terranova — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 16:54:31 +0000

i love your writing style. i wish you also designed video games because i wold like to visit the elves who live in the tree roots. but i’ll just have to wait and read the book instead.

By: Michelle

Michelle — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 12:09:46 +0000

That’s absolutely beautiful Craig! I love the expanded opening and description of the elves. You also added more humor to the narration which works wonderfully. I especially like: “adult conversations that consisted mostly of weather or village gossip.”;” but no one would ever admit to having a troll in their family, so the rumor was never proven as fact.” Very very funny!

But my favorite is how you ended the chapter especially ” I will feel awfully silly talking to myself, in which case I might as well be talking to a particularly troublesome weed.” LOL!! Reminds me of Princess Bride and Lemony Snicket.

I didn’t think it was possible to make it any better than it already was but you certainly did it. I can’t wait to read more.

By: Antonio

Antonio — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 03:28:09 +0000

I did see Micky Rooney on tv once. Does that count?

By: Ken

Ken — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 01:53:05 +0000

While I’ve not met an elf, I did nearly hook up with an oompah loompah.

By: Polt

Polt — Mon, 24 Sep 2007 23:28:25 +0000

I thought I saw an elf at work once, one of those elves from Lord Of The Rings. he was tall, lean and muscular, and had pale skin, and blonde hair, straight and long, down over his shoulders.

And then he smiled and I saw he had the teeth of someone from West Virginia…and I knew he couldn’t be an elf.

Although the teeth were strangely reminisent of the orcs, so maybe he was a halfbreed, who knows?

HUGS…