OMG! That was totaly amazing! I felt more moved by that than I ever imagined that I would be. It was tragic, deep, and funny. I kept wondering if Eric would be saved at the last minute. I think it was more impactfull that he wasn’t. Thank you for all the effort you put into entertaining us. You are deeply appreciated. Good luck on the novel! We will miss you.
Yeah, I have to agree, that was pretty moving and a great way to end that storyline, what an enjoyable way to start my morning.
I’ll toast to your writing project tomorrow night while getting shitfaced and making more rock band videos to post on my Facebook, giving people something to enjoy while I too start working on a new writing project .
Wow (It didn’t really feel like it was that many pages, until I had to scroll back up). I love how you tied everything together (and looking back over the previous ones, I realized that I’d missed some points — I’d forgotten that those were Jeremy’s parents next to him, not just other friends).
Yay! I’m so glad everyone likes it! I was a little worried since it was so long, but I really didn’t want to break it up into two parts since I thought the flashbacks were all pretty relevant to the conclusion, and the connection might have been lost if it were broken up.
The splooge bomb and cum rags are my favorite part too
Oh my, I’m with Josh, it almost make me leak water a bit. *sniff* Funny though, the animations were great and made me snort out loud. Amazing job, we will miss you and your genius in August.
Awesome finale and great ending. My favorite part was the splooge bomb and the automatic cum-rag dispenser. Why didn’t Vagina-girl get a splooge bomb? Don’t you want to do a sequel? “Son of Master Bader”, oh, I see, never mind.
Have a very successful month of August and check in with us from time to time. The space-time-continuum as we know if would cease to exist, if your dancing monkeys all went into Craig-withdrawal at the same time.
I am glad that you did not split this up. It would have not had the same emotional buildup. Also I didn’t notice the extreme length because I was so drawn in by the plot.
Wow this was amazing! Such an epic undertaking. I was right! I knew he was Eric’s boyfriend! It sad that he had to die. But it was an awesome ending. Congratulations
The mom hug was so touching! And now I know telling the truth leads to good things (unless it’s about the size of a man’s package). And the “C” word! I like that Master Bader went out with a bang. “did you think about me” hilarious! I didn’t know that SV’s V came off, I thought it was his eyebrows.
That was absolutely brilliant! So funny, suspenseful and very touching. You did such a fantastic job of bringing everything together. You really have to have this published in a book. It’s wonderful that we had a chance to read it as you wrote it, like the serialized books. But I think it is so well thought out it will be especially wonderful when people can read it all together and really appreciate all the details and well designed story. It’s definitely among your best work. BRAVO once again and thank you so much for sharing it all with us. We will be able to say that we were the first to experience it!
Michelle M.: josh is apparently in Boston and apparently drunk. Not that either of those things are bad, but it may explain the comments. Either that, or he’s just being “SASSY!” (said with jazz hands!)
OMG! That was totaly amazing! I felt more moved by that than I ever imagined that I would be. It was tragic, deep, and funny. I kept wondering if Eric would be saved at the last minute. I think it was more impactfull that he wasn’t. Thank you for all the effort you put into entertaining us. You are deeply appreciated.
Good luck on the novel! We will miss you.
What would this look like in Russian?
Yeah, I have to agree, that was pretty moving and a great way to end that storyline, what an enjoyable way to start my morning.
I’ll toast to your writing project tomorrow night while getting shitfaced and making more rock band videos to post on my Facebook, giving people something to enjoy while I too start working on a new writing project
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That was great. Kudos on the masturbation animation. And the hairy palms. And “Splooge bomb!”
Wow (It didn’t really feel like it was that many pages, until I had to scroll back up). I love how you tied everything together (and looking back over the previous ones, I realized that I’d missed some points — I’d forgotten that those were Jeremy’s parents next to him, not just other friends).
Splooge bomb (feat. cum ragz) = amazing
The note Eric left = heartbreaking…i tink I almost had water escape my eyeholes!
Epic, absolutely epic. You are the master. Bader.
Yay! I’m so glad everyone likes it! I was a little worried since it was so long, but I really didn’t want to break it up into two parts since I thought the flashbacks were all pretty relevant to the conclusion, and the connection might have been lost if it were broken up.
The splooge bomb and cum rags are my favorite part too
Oh my, I’m with Josh, it almost make me leak water a bit. *sniff* Funny though, the animations were great and made me snort out loud. Amazing job, we will miss you and your genius in August.
Yay! Awww!
Good fun, but I have to confess that when the guy reveals “he was my boyfriend” I couldn’t help but think of Cloris Leachman in “Young Frankenstein.”
Speaking of leaking water, bravo on details like the tear in Jeremy’s eye when his mom hugs him.
Wow.
That was amazing.
I may or may not have gotten teary a couple of times. This is masterful storytelling.
Thanks for doing this for us humble Puntabufolk, Craig!
If i had the ability to feel things, this would have gotten to me…….fortunately I’m dead inside
I loved it!
Bravo Craig!
You’ve come a long way since Super Viagra and the jack-o’-lantern. Bravo!
Awesome, simply awesome. My eyes got watery a couple of times, and I am the cold hearted bastard that had venison burgers after watching Bambi. Bravo.
Good luck with the novel! If you find time, we would love to hear about your progress over the next month, maybe an occasional word count?
PS your novel better be starring us…aka your musez and biggest inspirationz!
Awesome finale and great ending. My favorite part was the splooge bomb and the automatic cum-rag dispenser. Why didn’t Vagina-girl get a splooge bomb? Don’t you want to do a sequel? “Son of Master Bader”, oh, I see, never mind.
Have a very successful month of August and check in with us from time to time. The space-time-continuum as we know if would cease to exist, if your dancing monkeys all went into Craig-withdrawal at the same time.
I am glad that you did not split this up. It would have not had the same emotional buildup. Also I didn’t notice the extreme length because I was so drawn in by the plot.
Hurray! That was pretty sweet! I loved the use of analepsis! Now I feel bad for Master Bader.
Wow this was amazing! Such an epic undertaking. I was right! I knew he was Eric’s boyfriend! It sad that he had to die. But it was an awesome ending. Congratulations
The mom hug was so touching! And now I know telling the truth leads to good things (unless it’s about the size of a man’s package). And the “C” word! I like that Master Bader went out with a bang. “did you think about me” hilarious! I didn’t know that SV’s V came off, I thought it was his eyebrows.
Loved it – awesome job Craig!
damn blocker at work, I had to wait until now to see it here at home. WELL worth the wait.
Good luck on the novel Craiggers! Be looking forward to September 1st to have you back.
HUGS…
That was absolutely brilliant! So funny, suspenseful and very touching. You did such a fantastic job of bringing everything together. You really have to have this published in a book. It’s wonderful that we had a chance to read it as you wrote it, like the serialized books. But I think it is so well thought out it will be especially wonderful when people can read it all together and really appreciate all the details and well designed story. It’s definitely among your best work. BRAVO once again and thank you so much for sharing it all with us. We will be able to say that we were the first to experience it!
I have two favorite SV & VG episodes:
-Super Viagra Saves Christmas
-The Origins of Vagina Girl
No mooshy stuff in them. They’re just plain funny.
[whisper] I’m not a yo-yo…
josh – are you quoting Mandy Moore lyrics or did someone ask you to go “around the world”?
Michelle M.: josh is apparently in Boston and apparently drunk. Not that either of those things are bad, but it may explain the comments. Either that, or he’s just being “SASSY!” (said with jazz hands!)
HUGS…
Huh?
*applause applause applause* Well done Craiggers.