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Mike said in July 23rd, 2007 at 9:54 pm

Dear Puntabulous,

As I write from the city of brotherly love, there is someone probably breaking into my car, which is not very brotherly like if you ask me. I visit once and awhile for a pick me up, a shot of Craig and a snort of Olivia (sniff)… well I guess not anymore, since I just found out that Olivia has seceded. Thanks to what you do, the world is a little bit more dorkier.

-Mike

David said in February 6th, 2008 at 12:44 am

Chris Crocker reading: Interesting take on the text. However, more range and effective placement of dramatic beats would have given the piece a stronger arc.

Raft Trip: Mildly diverting travelogue. Could do with some more aggressive editing to give the narrative greater life. Sound quality of the dialog was also lacking.

C Team: Very entertaining premise, but the endlessly recurring motifs of the camo tarp and binoculars weren’t justified by the mild comic payoffs later in the piece.

Cingular Ad: More exposition is required to give heft to the missed insight from the future, although the coda has a nice comic bite to it.

My Really Bad Karaoke: Egregious is not just a vocabulary word. Do you even know what Broadway musical that’s from? Felice, however, acquitted herself admirably, all things considered.

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